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This lust consumes me, to kill you slowly,
But this curse controls me, it makes me holy.
Will my painless agony ever end?
Or will my demon self forever pend?

I miss me....I miss that killer,
I miss my life; it was a horror/thriller.
My favorite thing was to hit and run,
T’was a chase for our lives that had just begun

I won’t go into detail, neither will I explain,
But this I will say; no one was fit for my game.
Then along comes Zuka, and so does this curse,
Now I play a different game, and this one on Earth.
It’s not nearly as easy, and it lasts much longer,
For I have yet to beat it, all the while getting stronger.

There’s just two catches, to this game of strategy,
I must love you, you human tragedy.
You’re a sad, sad race, and you’re all so weak,
The second catch, I’m now a human freak.

This game we are playing, this long lasting strife,
This game I must win, to win back my life.
If I don’t win, I’ll live here on Earth,
If I live here on Earth I will keep this curse.

The problem is, this game is real,
So if I don’t win, this curse will be sealed,
No starting over, no second tries,
There are no re-dos or extra lives,
I must win this thing I call a game,
Or forever human I will be staying.

I miss me....I miss that killer,
I miss my life, a constant thriller.
I miss the chases, the hit and runs,
But that me, has been said and done.
This poem is for my and :iconvampire-valentine: 's art trade!! So I hope you like it.....I had made a poem before this and it was 4 verses already, but ....I didnt like it so I spent about 2 hours last night writing this one. I hope this is what you wanted vampire-valentine!!! I tried my best to make it kind of....emo, but I dunno....it didnt turn out as well as I'd hoped. Please comment! Thanx!!
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aady Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2007
wuff ... its really nice ... gawt no words to describe how awesome it eees :D
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dpsoccerbaby Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007   Photographer
aw! thanx so much!! :D
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dpsoccerbaby Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2007   Photographer
ahh!!! :love: I love you too!!! :D thanx soo much! yay :dance: I'm very happy now too. lol :hug: haha, no I'm am definetely not that good....:( but I'm getting better! lol :) haha its ok, I'm just glad you like it. :w00t:
YES!!! :worship: lol but it really helped when you did that informational pic tho.
oh dont worry theres not rush! :D
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vampire-valentine Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2007
yay!! :glomp: !! *does the happy dance* lol. i think your very good *^^*
wohoo! i knew that was a smart idea *proud of self*
okay then :) il be sure to put it extra detail then ;)
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dpsoccerbaby Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2007   Photographer
why thank you! :hug: and you an amazing artist! :)
haha you should be, I'd prolly still be writing it over and over again if you didnt. I was so confused.....:confused: :? :pointl: me :lmao:
aw thanks! but you dont have to!!
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vampire-valentine Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
wow thanks^^ :hug:

lol ^^ i will do anyways L)
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dpsoccerbaby Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007   Photographer
np :D
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vampire-valentine Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2007
OMG! wow..*in awe* omg i love you! thankyou so much!
*tears in eyes*
i dont know what to say lol but i really like it, to see this written by you (who is a mega awesome writer!) and its about them...:love: just makes me very very happy yay!

you wrote shiro really well and his situation, ... okay i just am speechless as to what to say
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i will have yours done very soon :glomp:!!
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dpsoccerbaby Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2007   Photographer
gah sry look at the other comment, I forgotsted to hit reply. lol :D
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